Now that we have finished our project we decided to show it to our media class because we wanted to get feedback from people that have not viewed it before as they will have a fresh perspective, compared to our group who have been editing it for the past few months. The aim was for them to pick up on any mistakes and faults that we may have overlooked as well as any improvements that they think would make our opening better.
Here is their feedback:
The overall response was fairly positive except for a few minor criticisms and suggested changes:
- In the over-shoulder shot with the slow zoom the cameraman is visible for few seconds in the reflection of the mirror.
- The establishing shot was too short because we only had one, they suggested adding another one that is different or extending the length of our current one.
- The black screen between the production company and the start of our opening was too short.
- When our actor is crying she wipes her face, but there are not any tears on her face.
- It would be good to have ambient sound in the flashbacks to make it more like a home video, or add disturbing demonic sounds to reflect her mindset
- The pacing at the end was too long.
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